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1st Jul 2016, 11:26 PM

Lt. Locust

Cool! The new program made colouring faster, but it ate my speech bubbles and dialogue, which slowed me down a little as I tried to figure that out. But I'm good now.

So this page! I find it easy to follow, even hough there's a million panels. I think I need to work on shading flat surfaces, because I honestly didn't know how to colour the flashing red light. I also couldn't figure out how to get the ship streak to look right, but I'll have lots of practice with that in the future. :)

Eh. I always worry that my dialogue is too expositional, though. Like, the shorter the conversation, the more likely the information presented will appear ham-fisted. Haha, maybe I should look at picking up a proof-reader or editor. Hm.

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